CBMokedi

I love this whole paragraph.

CBMokedi

Damn his father is a monster

CBMokedi

It's sad for this type of old noble that has nothing but their name like this. They're too prideful and rigid to change.

E.M Malachite

I know I’ve already commented on Chapters 1 and 2, but not on Kerning! Again, love the way you opened this line. It’s attention-grabbing right from the start. Certain historical periods have this romanticized idea about them so this darkness just smacks you right in the face and makes you curious right away.\ \ The first-person aspect really fits the voice of the narrator; it feels like them writing and speaking, not a writer who’s made characters. It’s like I’ve found a deeply personal journal or something and I love that feeling.