[1] Kolo: The Devil-Child

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ShockTrooperCorps
Great intro chapter! Can't wait to read more!
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ShockTrooperCorps
Oh frick...that doesn't sound like a happy memory
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ShockTrooperCorps
Kolo out here destroying AI generated art
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L. Sandberg
Made me laugh, thanks
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ShockTrooperCorps
Glad I could be of service lol
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ShockTrooperCorps
Coraline vibes
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L. Sandberg
I fricking love Coraline.
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ShockTrooperCorps
It better not be Turkish delight...
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ShockTrooperCorps
Kolo...Guard? (Horrible pun, I'm sorry)
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L. Sandberg
No you're not! Got me too. XD
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ShockTrooperCorps
You're right, I'm not, LOL XD
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ShockTrooperCorps
If I'm her I would've been like "...gee, thanks ๐Ÿ˜‚,"
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ShockTrooperCorps
Hm... hopefully this lady has good intentions
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Anne Ranta
This is a very strong opening chapter. I remember being incredibly intrigued the first time as well. It's nice to start it again after such a long pause.
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Anne Ranta
Because he's not the monster you think.
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Anne Ranta
Oh, I remember this. It's a great twist.
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Anne Ranta
Rain can be nice to listen when you're warm and safe in your home.
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Anne Ranta
I don't think she believes you, dear.
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Anne Ranta
That is an interesting question.
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Anne Ranta
When you're hungry enough, just about anything sounds good.
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Anne Ranta
It would be difficult to trust in her shoes.
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Anne Ranta
I love the details you give. I feel sad for her. ๐Ÿ’”
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Anne Ranta
I'm excited to start reading this again!
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A.J Jennings
Don't trust her
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A.J Jennings
I'm reminded of Baba Yaga
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A.J Jennings
Haha I knew something was up
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E.M Malachite
Intriguing chapter. At first I was skeptical of the old lady because she was so nice, then I was thinking, okay, maybe I just have trust issues! And then the men came knocking and I was like, nope! Something's up! Maybe the creature hunting her is the one? And sure enough. Very interesting chapter. It moves at a great pace. I feel sad for Kolo!
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E.M Malachite
I KNEW IT
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E.M Malachite
WHAT
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E.M Malachite
So familiar with this. I've tried to do this all too much
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E.M Malachite
Ahahahah
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E.M Malachite
Oh goodness. Creepy! Makes me think of the pyramid head in Silent Hill, that thing freaked me out so much
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L. Sandberg
Iโ€™m also a fan of Silent Hill haha
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E.M Malachite
Poor Kolo
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E.M Malachite
Damn... That's so sad
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E.M Malachite
Lovely opening!
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