[2] Azvalath: A Harsh Lesson
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Anne Ranta
I wonder what that was that happened.
I agree with the earlier comment. It's a good place to end a chapter!
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Anne Ranta
what's this?😮 👀
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Anne Ranta
I'm surprised he dares to speak back to him, or maybe he's just lashing out being humiliated when he thinks himself a great warrior.
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Anne Ranta
He wants to become like Xigon and gain respect similar to his?
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Anne Ranta
That's a handy ability!
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Anne Ranta
Maybe he knows already?
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Anne Ranta
Dare he to tell you?
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Anne Ranta
That stab certainly won't help with trust issues...
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Anne Ranta
Yeah, what could they do to hurt her, huh?
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Anne Ranta
I think it takes more than that to gain her trust.
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Anne Ranta
Thinks himself invinsible, huh?
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Anne Ranta
She's feisty.
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Anne Ranta
I'm glad he hasn't lost that way of thinking.
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ShockTrooperCorps
Powerful ending to the chapter!
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ShockTrooperCorps
I mean, he's not wrong here
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ShockTrooperCorps
Ah, so Kolo got away
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ShockTrooperCorps
This whole section has a lot of good dialogue!
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ShockTrooperCorps
I mean, Tanjiro Kamado is the same, so... 🤷
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A.J Jennings
Oop
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E.M Malachite
This chapter asks a lot of interesting questions. I also enjoyed the dialogue between Xigon and Azvalath, they both bring up great points to each other. There are some great little worldbuilding details here too with their culture. It seems like all of them have different powers. So far what I'm thinking is that when you kill someone you can pray to the Iron God, and the Iron God may bring them back with an ability and that's how they planned on bringing the "devil-child" back home. It seems like they do believe she's a cursed "child" but they want her with them for some reason, perhaps because she's already so strong and would be a great addition to their warriors/soldiers? Hmm
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E.M Malachite
I think it's the fineness of their hairs but I don't know for certain haha
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E.M Malachite
Uhhhhhh o____o
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E.M Malachite
Awww. And also, wow this might be the first hug she's gotten in forever...?
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E.M Malachite
Ow
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E.M Malachite
Ooo I like the name Yayaba too
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E.M Malachite
I like the name Channei
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E.M Malachite
Must have? Does that mean he expects she could punch even harder than that!?
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E.M Malachite
Nice line with the lightning strike
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E.M Malachite
What the heck! That's some kind of power
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