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Anne Ranta
I'm a big Romeo and Juliet fan, that's what got me interested especially, hehe. It's interesting to see other versions of it! Though I admit I did notice myself missing more familiarity with the original story, for example; the love at first sight feeling.
I do like your writing and the details! I'm curious to see how this will go and what was Alex's father accused of that caused him to get fired. I'm curious to see how their relationship will progress.
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Sarah James
It is definitely a new take on an old classic with a focus on the forbidden love between to rival enemies whose fathers are at war.
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Anne Ranta
She? I wonder who he means. His mother or...?
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Anne Ranta
I like this paragraph.
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Anne Ranta
I wonder what his dad did to Alex's father.
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Anne Ranta
I had to google Timothée, he's cute.
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Anne Ranta
Because he likes the sense of danger?
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Anne Ranta
Being fair isn't their thing I see, often the case with bullies.
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Anne Ranta
lol, serious situation but I found this Jesus line amusing.
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Anne Ranta
I already like the opening paragraph and the descriptions!
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Mad scientist
“Do you trust Flock? Flock likes me, be more Flock” ICONIC! Loved it! 100%
Great chapter, moving on to the next one rn!
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Sarah James
Everyone should be more Flock 😂
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