Anne Ranta

It was interesting to see this from Tate's POV! Now I was able to let go any longing I might have felt in previous chapter in the original story line, lol. As it was stated it's a retelling and not mean to follow the original. To be honest it's much more refreshing this way. I can't wait to find out what's the truth behind those accusations. Has Tate's father threatened Alex's father into silence and he knows he is in no financial situation to fight back? I love your writing so far!

Anne Ranta

I think you are right.

Anne Ranta

And here we go...

Anne Ranta

I really like this paragraph, descriping him.

Anne Ranta

Interesting. I'm curious what happened and why would he choose to stay silent about the truth if he's innocent.

Anne Ranta

That would be puzzling.

Anne Ranta

I like that description of him telling lies.

Anne Ranta

Oh... But the client only found him cleaning them, not actually smoking?

Anne Ranta

I'm getting more intriqued of the reasons of their downfall.

Anne Ranta

Best not to overeat, especially in that heat. It's too easy to feel sick.

Anne Ranta

The heat can be unbearable with now air conditioning, especially if one has got used to owning one.