Chapter 1
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L. Sandberg
Cracking up
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L. Sandberg
2014. I feel old too. Thanks. 😂
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Librarian_Books
To make you feel even more old I was 11/12 years old in 2014 😂
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L. Sandberg
Nooooo 😠I was 13
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L. Sandberg
Pressuring people to drink is gross, if you ask me
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L. Sandberg
Ha! Liver and lung damage. I hate that I laughed but it’s true
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L. Sandberg
Nice way to show their relationship dynamics right off the bat.
Tip: Start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Makes dialogue so much easier to read.
I love that you’re including little details like checking pockets for wallets. Tiny things go a long way to bring characters to life!
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Librarian_Books
Thank you! I’ve asked on other platforms for advice and none. I’ll keep this in mind for future chapters!
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